Ok first off, the humor you use right off the bat with the scrolling text where it comes back down is hilarious lol. I feel like you didn't need the part where it goes dark, or maybe it could be shorter, like just a short blackout? didn't feel necessary. Good feel overall though
here's the game I helped with for this jam, if you wanted to check it out: https://itch.io/jam/gmtk-2020/rate/696287#post-1639104 thanks!