First thing that struck me were the animations. Really nice in two days especially the dog. Nice and simple. The dog animations were really well done. Great fit for the theme.
There were a few things I wasn't so sure about.
- I'm not getting audio? I think sounds would have enriched this. Is it my end there's something wrong?
- I was confused about getting the children to follow you? Was that the goal? To me it seemed I was supposed to but I feel I didn't get any feedback during the game when I did it. I could go through a level with or without the child. Maybe I just didn't finish it, once the levels looped around twice I stopped playing.
Overall, good job. First game I've played :)