Haha alright, I kinda liked it, but imma be honest it was kind of hard to tell what was happening. Maybe you could:
- Add "Crimson: " and stuff before the dialogue so we know whos who.
- Mabye add some sort of placeholder graphics for everything. I know its incomplete but at least a box or something. I really was not sure what was happening most of the time. Where was David? I really could not tell haha.