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The idea is nice, but the level design and application of it are mostly uninspired here, the last level's trick being the only exception. There are likely many more ways to expand upon the core mechanic of copy-pasting tiles and 4th wall breaking, not to mention other game objects that can mix up the level and diversity of challenges. So on one hand, it feels like a missed opportunity. But on the other hand, there was a 48hr constraint in place, so it's understandable.

That said, the level design does fall short of its potential. It feels more like a single trick that happens across multiple levels. All levels before the final one basically have the same solution, but this seems to be intentionally to function as a setup to subvert player expectations in the final one. It works but is a little bit underwhelming. Still, a good idea is a good idea.

The controls do feel rather unintuitive at times. To clarify for posterity, Click->[CTRL, C] to copy but [CTRL, V]->Click to paste (note the order between mouse & keyboard inputs). Apart from that, the platforming physics are rather sharp and unforgiving, which is troublesome for the A-D-Space control scheme. A tip for future players on this is to "solve" the level in your mind first, then do all the copy-paste steps, and finally use 2 hands for the platforming. The character's jump can clear about 3 tiles high, just about, and it's quite easy to fall off the edges, given the small size of the tiles.

The art and music are functional, and the visuals do read clearly. However, as these are pre-existing assets, the presentation score is limited accordingly. Thank you for making the text a readable font-size, though. It seems to be an issue for about 50% of the games I've played in this jam thus far.

Overall, there is a seed of creativity here, but it's still barely a sapling. It could produce much more engaging results if expanded upon, but the present form currently only reaches the extent of a single good one-time trick. Good work completing a game project in 48hrs!

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Wow! Thank you so much for the detailed review! As you can see, I ran out of time, and focused on the core mechanics instead of running with the idea. I made the last level in the last hour, and I was very satisfied when I saw that I was able to implement it correctly without breaking the whole game. I was planning to add more puzzles like this, but had to face the reality, and finish the game as it was at that moment.

For the controls I had several ideas, and this fell the closest to a image/map editor. I can understand if that feels weird for some. I was thinking about leaving out the click completely, and refering only to the current mouse position. Maybe that would have been better.

I was also planning to allow multi-tile copy. That would have been a nice solution for the tiny platform issue. But limiting the movement controls to only these three keys was completely my fault, not related to the time constraint. I felt that because I like this sceme, I don't need to implement others even though it would have been just a few more characters in the code.

Thanks again for playing, for the extensive review, and for the tip for future players!

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I think the platforming controls could have both W and Space be for jumping, but the more important fix is probably the physics and precision of the jump, coupled with possibly larger blocks to mitigate the ease of overshooting or slipping off after a jump. With those fixes, it would probably reach a good enough state to be mostly comfortable.

As for the copy-paste controls, no clicking might be good. The changes to couple it with would be an always-on tile highlight where the mouse cursor points and a separate visual indicator or cue when something is copied. Paste is visible on the spot, but Copy is visually harder to tell.

IMO, the multi-tile copy is probably best left out unless you plan to expand the game into a full sized one, where many more aspects and possibilities related to the core idea are explored. Not having it actually helps reinforce the trick in the last level, and you would also be trading clarity of controls for a minor convenience feature.

It is an attractive feature from an engineer’s perspective, as it feels like it should be part of the package of features. However, from a design and player experience angle, it would likely bring more confusion than convenience to the player unless they are given ample practice to get used to the basic form of the copy-paste feature first. In a larger game, though, there would be time & space to teach players from basic to advanced features via gameplay as they progress.

What I can somewhat extrapolate from your intention to “complete the feature set,” though, is that you probably either are or could be a very good software engineer. It’s related to the idea of a “quality gene” (as described by Chris Hecker and Jonathan Blow in a forum discussion). Just a fun little observation. Of course, this quality benefits game-dev and many other craftsmanship type fields as well.

For level design, Edmund Mcmillen (Super Meat Boy) has a nice bonus feature bit from Indie Game: The Movie, and Matt Thorson (Celeste) has a GDC Talk on the topic as well. Both can be found on YouTube, in case you’re interested.

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Wow, thank you so much! I will check them out!