I liked the story, and you really conveyed that feeling of worry about something you can't control, and just distracting yourself and telling yourself it will be okay.
I would really love the lighting to be better, in a bad way. As in, make the fluorescent lights actually suck and be harsh. I think the graphics and modeling could use a lot of work.
Although I think you did a good job with the story, I don't think I'd say it was very fun to play. I certainly appreciate it though.