This is awesome! The writing is hilarious, the art is pretty, and the mechanics are unique. It's like an inverse stealth game where you have to avoid seeing instead of being seen. The only criticism I can think of is that there's not really any feedback when you lose or win; it just abruptly restarts or continues on. But that is certainly excusable for a jam game, expecially when everything is so good.
Keep up the great work! =)