Nice job! The visuals and all of the cool little touches made it appear extremely polished. Aesthetics were on point. Music was great, and I assume it was timed, because it came in very dramatically at key points. I did not understand the bargain mechanic until I played around with it a bit. Some of the speech bubbles passed really quickly right as they popped up. I'll look forward to the full story. Right now, I have no idea what's going to happen.
Very very nice.
-Zachary