The game was a bit choppy but it was a really creative experience and I think you should continue to work on it to expand that narrative. The humor and visual language of the game are certainly strongpoints and I hope you work to push them even further.
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Thank you!
A narrative game like this was something we've never done before, so I'm glad parts of it seemed to work so well :)
Will definately consider continuing. All the things we learned in the jam and all the feedback will have an impact on my/our other projects as well.
I uploaded a post jam windows version that should be smoother :)
https://gluftur.itch.io/out-of-control-post-jam-windows-version