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I see, 

For dialogues I'd say what I told you previously, just make the text appear a bit faster. It would give more dynamism to text I think. 
Also maybe you can change the color of the important information so that it's more catchy and people would remember better. (like the three killer thing i didn't remember ahah)   

Ok thanks