I can definitely see this game improving a lot once the small bugs and programming issues are fixed, and also once the story is improved upon, this game would be pretty great as it has a decent foundation. I would recommend from personal experience to try out doing the assets yourself instead of from the assets store even if you would prefer not to. Rounding out your abilities as a game developer can be a great skill, and remember nobody's art is perfect the first time! A Game Jam is also a perfect place to try out new things. Good job for a week!