I really like the concept, very original. And I also really like the way the game looks. But damn this game is hard to play. The controls feel really quite finicky. Maybe some keyboard and mouse controls would be better. The moment the player jumps could also be more clearly indicated. Maybe with a timeline where a green line moves from right to left, indicating the moment of the jump?
I'd really appreciate it if you would have a look at my game as well, and be sure to download the smaller version :D