One of favorite parts is the fact that you actually added full dialogue, and it's cheekily self aware. Love the line about how he knows that it's weird to ask you to save his planet right after showing up. Putting a lot of games on blast right there! 😂
Overall there's certainly a lot of work to be done polishing this up, not a huge fan of the UI graphics and the world could use some more textures but for a one person project it's scope is impressive! Nice stuff! Keep it up :)