Here is my honest opinion:
- The file size is massive. I would recommend you do some optimizing before exporting.
- Don't change the size of the text as it comes by. It made me restart reading multiple times because the letters jumped all over the screen.
- Nice voice recording.
- There was no music inside the night club.
- Nice screen transitions.
- Animations on the robots are also nice.
It felt more like a visual novel than a detective game for me. You just experience what happened, but you can't really investigate yourself. I could image that would be very hard to create in 7 days.
I hope you like the feedback!