The Good:
- Good art and animation
- Challenging platforming
- Signs marked dead ends - lets player know they are going the wrong way
Could Improve:
- Add more sounds - adds feedback to the game. Right now the game feels very void (especially with the music). There could also be a hurt sound that plays when the player touches spikes
- Learn to scale your UI and game - even when I clicked fullscreen, some parts of the game were chopped off and the camera was zoomed in. I can see you're using Unity, I recommend you change your canvas scaler from "constant pixel size" to "scale with screen size". This should help you a little
- Weak implementation of the theme - only the vague idea of the theme was there
Overall:
Well done on the game. The theme for this jam was hard, and I understand that it was hard to create a game around it. I recommend you take what you learned from this game and use it to make an even more awesome one in the future.
Edit - for some reason my comment got posted 3 times, sorry if you got a lot of notifications.