The Good:
- Story and humour - the story really adds a lot to the gameplay. The little intro in the beginning was really entertaining. The little jokes also added to the casual feel of the game
- Art and sound - well done on making all of the assets yourself. They really made the game come together as a whole
- Clarity - great job on introducing the player to every mechanic one by one, giving a nice tutorial and a situation where they are forced to learn to use it
Could Improve:
- Translation - this is really not a big deal. The English translation could be better, but I won't rate it lower because of it. It also made some moments funnier as well
- Adherence to theme - the theme is there, but it could be better. It kind of has something to do with the story, and it's one of the mechanics the player must use. However, I didn't find the need to use once the teleportation was introduced. Would be nicer if the game reloved around it a little more
- Sound volume - the music was a bit too loud and got repetitive really quickly. Also, during the event when the boulder came crashing down I had to mute my headphones
Overall:
A really good game, one of the most fun entries I've played so far. Hopefully you continue to develop it after the jam ends.