Something different than most other game I rated, I liked it.
As someone already said, the text resizing hurts readability, scrolling text would be better.
Also, it seemed like some dialogue text boxes were out of sync with the voices (a bit before or after) sometimes. And there were some strange silence between the lines of differents characters (that reminded of some old games^^), I thought it hurt the flow of the dialogue and story.
Now, for the positive :
- A story ! Although short, it's a pleasant change from most game in this jam.
- Good audio (sound effects, music...) and graphics.
- And... voices ! That's a really nice touch, and combined the audio effects, it really gives life to the whole thing.
Impressed that you did this in 4 days, good job :)