Well, the ending was quite... I´m not an 16 year old girl and these characters make me feel pleased that I never was. But I like the contrast between style and content. Absolutely stick with it. A clear TODO list is a great thing; something that most RPG/adventure games should have.
Some observations purely from gameplay perspective:
- Graphics seem very polished, but music got irritating. Softer sound might do the trick here.
- Some menus (pause, for instance) are still in Spanish.
- I didn't find a way to skip one text/dialogue screen to the next one. Conversations take quite a while to watch (wait) through, so there should definately be one.