Since I'm only making games as a hobby it is normal for me to jump from project to project, so I may not be very helpful on that end. But from a consumer point of view I have to say this (and please, don't be offended).: if you want to make a good impression you're going to be more careful with your game descriptions. It's not right grammatically and some words are wrong, too. English isn't my first language and even I can see that. For me as a consumer it might not be a problem, but if you want to get a job that way it could be a big obstacle.