Pros and cons are down below) Check out the game here (the game is the 1st there):
Advantages:
1. A very unexpected plot twist at the end! I think it's very cool how the story was unraveled through the details in the environment.
2. The game had voice acting! I think that's pretty awesome. Moreover, voice acting was good and believable - adore that!
Disadvantages:
1. Maybe it would be cool if the player would have more opportunities to investigate environment - open different doors, walk around, etc. I guess right now the player seems to be pretty powerless going through such a short experience.
2. Also, I think the game would benefit a lot from having different endings. For example, the first ending would be the same but then the player'd get the ability to change something and then you get a good end.
3. I wish the game would have more horror elements! The one at the roof was pretty potent, but it didn't feel like enough. The game is so short :( I want more ahah
Overall:
Wonderful experience! I'd rate it 4/5 because I think it can be further improved. The simplest ways to improve a short game - add significant to the story details (the devil is in the details :)) or more endings (it does not have to be fully animated ending - you could add a different epilogue and the game would instantly become interesting to replay)
Hope my feedback was useful!