Hmm. I like this. An interesting story, that's customized by the player. I didn't see any changes to the text with my choices, just my choices changing how I felt about the situation. And that's perfectly great! Your writing is nice; sometimes I felt there was a lot on one page, but that's just me. Seriously, I really like this. Keep uploading to itch.io! :D
(I'm also in this Twiny Jam! My game is HCF.)