Font is a little hard to read. I think a dissolve/fade effect into the text would have helped the game a lot, rather than making the words seem curt in its transition. Is the art chalk/made with a digital chalk brush? It's quite good, and fits, but interesting choice. I felt key scenes that needed illustration were lacking (such as at the door, when he describes the eye as a sickly blue). And without much art to guide me, it was sometimes hard to tell what was actually going on.
Some music would really help the atmosphere, and maybe voice-acting, too. That scream startled me. :( Great work with the sound effects.
The choices left me quite displeased. Every time I clicked "reconsider", it would go back on the path to "do it" in a few lines, right? I would have liked to see some creative variations on Poe's story. Perhaps when reconsidering the murder (2nd choice) the narrator stabs out the eye and not the man? Things like that.