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Good concept but it needs a bit more work on the execution. When I picked up the first potion I immediately thought of alice in wonderland. That's an interesting take! Here are a few things that need work:

  • Player and camera movement doesn't feel great and are probably the greatest show stoppers
  • Sound effects and music are also really important to set the proper mood of the game. So please add those
  • The contrast of the players color against the purple background is not good. I would suggest that you check out some existing color palettes and you those or watch a view tutorials on how to make your own
  • I got stuck underground after drinking a potion, climbing up and falling down again. That hints that you need to do a bit more playtesting

I hope you are okay with me giving you some feedback and please remember that every game you finish is a feat in itself :)

Thanks, I'm glad you like the concept and I appreciate all the feedback. I am curious what bothered you about the camera movement. I know there are serious problems with the player's jumps and the walking motion feels really bland to me but I haven't even thought about the camera motion since I wrote it up early in development so I'm interested to hear you mention it.