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This game is great, but only after the initial wall of scrolling text is over. If you do any updates after the ranking period is done, I would recommend putting that information somewhere in-game as reading material, such as on a table as an "old informational pamphlet". Having it all scroll by at once like that is very intimidating, and especially having it scroll on its own with no player input encourages the player to not actually read any of it. 

Similarly, I think having the website be displayed as a line of narration at the end would be more convenient. Not having the text move would make it easier for the player to type it into their browser and/or write it down. Putting the link on the game page would also be a good idea.

Those are both awesome points! thanks for the idea!