Thanks for the critique! :)
Yeah, originally there was going to be 2 more scenes:
1. An opening scene of The Detective pulling up in the car, but time constraints made it unnecessary effort to make all the graphics required.
2. Another chance at investigating the place between The Detective's first round of questions to the doctor (the questions similar to the driver's) and the ending questions. The final set was supposed to more like a denouement once you went to the doc and were like "I've solved it/I've failed to solve it!"
But, when push came to shove the time didn't permit the extra scripting to make all that work. :(
The driver was fun to write because he really wants no part in the game, literally or figuratively. Once again, though, thanks for the review. :)