I tried the game and it looks great. I think it overwhelms so much text at first, and if you're lazy to read it, you end up not understanding exactly what happens in the game. Despite that, I think it's a well-finished game. Good job! :)
Thanks for checking it out. Your totally right about the text, getting instructions into the game was a bit of a last second rush. I just put some more consolidated instructions up on the jam page.