I enjoyed that, it was a nice thoughtful break. The music was beautiful, and I enjoyed the art too.
Having said that, this game is probably too much to ask from a game jam audience. I went back and forth 3 times and still managed to come up 2 stars short and had no clue where to go next, so I quit before I saw an ending, which makes me sad.
I'd recommend either going to a free moving mechanic (the tap to move is particularly tiring on a trackpad), or halving the number of points you need to tell the whole story.