This was a one helluva lit game. If you can ignore the minor grammar mistakes; overall gameplay was nice.
First of all, a nice startup to the story. Not so slow, not so fast. Detailed just enough.
Characters are talking in their ways. Their dialogues are unique to themselves. Even if out of context, if you focus, you could easily say which character said a phrase.
These little intros are nice too. It makes the player curious and makes'em want to play.
Overall artwork is not the best but still quite nice. Actually, character drawings are quite decent looking.
Back to the story; It is written on really strong pillars and easy to understand. Sometimes sweeps you away from reality.
And this is just beginning.
God, I can't wait to play more!