hey @gun_san12, i am new here and i really want to contribute to my favorite furry visual novels.
I enjoyed your story and I want to give strong constructive criticisms in improving the English texts, and you can find me as a Twitch/ twitter/ youtube and other social media, you can find me on twitter as TJ9304,
and Twitch is twitch.tv/tjragequits
I am a mobile game player and i stream mobile games and i picked a few visual novels that i am very fond as a game developer and game programmer.
may i send feedback here in these replies?