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I was talking about your promotional material. Like I said: It’s fine if you want them to be twins, but just looking at this page, all I see are some blobs and three humanoid character - two of which have the same skin and artwork… I was surprised when you wrote that the game had that many characters. That’s great. You should show them in a lineup or at some kind of community dinner or event, so the reader gets the right impression about Ova Magica.

A bit of an aside, but I wanted to give you the heads-up: “over 10 bachelors in total” will be read as “exactly 11 bachelors - one of which isn’t developed yet”. It’d like somebody stating that their game was “in the Top 7 of such-and-such games” meaning “it was in a Top 10 and made seventh place”.