haha, an endearing game.
I like the format the game is presented in, and some very clever storytelling. I even felt some suspense and intrigue due to the good mixture of visuals and audio.
Nothing really comes to mind in terms of fixes / minor improvements that wouldn't be considered feature creep, its a well contained game that delivers.
Additional features I could suggest are a chapter select system, overview of the branching choices, completionist bonus, secrets.
Well done, its a great entry!