Great to hear that a sequel is coming out! I love the inspiration, and overall the whole game is good, and as for the bad endings, I am not sure there really are any bad endings not ending in death. My favorite ending in particular is when you become a vampire as well. Overall I hope to see the addition to see the series, and experience what you come up with next.
On a different note, I don't know much about coding, I am currently in 8th grade,and a friend of mine and I were just making some simple designs on pixel-art as models for the game ideas we have (We each make a game, and they both tie into each others story lines.) What is the process for making games like this? What is Twine?