Great job Gen! As always, love your artstyle, but I think the concept of the game is what really shines here. I love the idea of exploring your past and putting together memories, with the cherry on top being the nessescity for the player to remember key pieces of dialogue. I think there is so much here to potentially expand on and turn into a full game, so I really hope someone picks it up (I will def advocate for it if we aren't in the same group).
I think the one thing that feels off to me is the lack of clicking sounds when progressing through the visual novel portions. It feels a bit weird without that audio feedback and it just leaves it feeling a bit empty.
Still, thats a pretty minor blip in an otherwise fantastic game, great job Gen!