Really impressive that you drew all of the art for this! It looks very good, and you've done an excellent job on keeping the style together. I also like that you have an alternate ending. Visual novels aren't really my style of game, but I thought the story was pretty decent. You could probably have lost a lot of the extra functionality (saving, skipping etc) without losing any real quality because of how short it is, and that might have given you some more time to add a couple extra bits of 'gameplay' here and there. Overall a solid and lighthearted submission, good job :)
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The art was definitely my priority when making the game, so I'm pretty relieved it's come across this well. Unfortunately a lot of that functionality is a part of the engine I'm using so it wasn't something I spent time on, I just have poor time management skills DX but that's partly why I joined this jam in the first place haha. Thank you for the feedback!