This is very well put together for a first game! I think these are RPG Maker's stock assets, right? I've only ever seen them used in, er, unpolished games, but here they match the quality of the writing. Well done! I hope you try your hand at some larger game-making. :)
Unfortunately I couldn't finish it — I'm not sure if it's RPG Maker or my VM or what, but I always hit a point where the game stops redrawing. :( Probably not your fault.