Ok, as a screenwriter and filmmaker I will say the story needs revision. There is absolutely no character arches. It felt WAY more plot driven than character driven. I would focus on developing the characters as people and not placeholders for a plot-point. I think it would be a more emotional moment for the player if you build a connection with the wife a bit more. It just seemed too hollow.
Story aside, the game itself is good. I like the artwork and music but more branch narrative choices would've been great as well.
I also like the use of percentages to show how many made the moral decision or not. Overall good job. Just work on story structure a bit more.