I really, really liked this! I think it's such a shame that it isn't getting as much attention as it deserves, it's really up there with a lot of other VNs that I've really liked.
I'm really excited for both Marissa's and Jack's routes, and I do hope you at least get enough funding to make the base game.
I'm also super glad that you're planning on doing polyamorous routes as well, because I've kind of been questioning for a while if I might be or not, and it would be nice to see a game with good representation since there are so few.