I really like the pacing of the story in regards to the frequency of choices! I think the amount of choices is great. They really made me feel as if I was expressing myself as the character without drastically changing the story too much. I do feel as if the choices are changing my personality, and thus how I react to larger parts of the story down the line. Like I said earlier, there is a lot of text, but it's really nice that the choices, even if somewhat innocuous, break up large blocks of it. Overall, this is looking really good!