hi sarah!
Protagonist seems adventurous, thoughtful, and appropriately bewildered without laboring over that fact. I don't have any assumptions about the ending yet really! I haven't felt the narrative priming me for any particular development yet. More general feedback: Your prose is strong and executes light horror themes very well, but I would recommend (as it seems some other folks have) changing up some of the interactivity, either in links that expand to provide more information/detail or in expressive dialogue choices, or something like that. It seems like you are guiding us toward certain story beats, which is working well, but it's worth exploring other ways to present and interact with the prose you already have! Excited to see where this goes next.
- jess