First, thank you so much for the in-depth feedback. I really appreciate it! You make a lot of very good points about the game, and some of it is stuff we realized right as the deadline for the jam was approaching. There was more we wish we could've added and improved, but wanted to deliver something by the deadline.
I like a lot of the points and ideas you brought up. You're definitely right about the story not being super cohesive, and it's something we should've hammered out properly before writing the outline. I personally have no plans on continuing this story, but I am working on developing another spooky game at the moment. (keep an eye out for it at the end of the month if you're interested!)
I'm personally taking a lot of the feedback people gave for this game and carrying it with me as I plan out future games. I'm glad you still enjoyed parts of it in the end, and I really appreciate getting such great feedback! Thank you!