Very interesting style-It reminds me less of a typical choice narrative game, but more so a story book that has actions you can dictate, but still follows the overall theme of the game. I quite like it!
First, the UI scrolling kinda threw me off-It made it hard to read after making choices. That's my only nitpick though.
Second, I like how you play into the video game paradox of things/events not existing until it is done so by the player. It makes me wonder how much of the game is predetermined or not. It helps make me feel in control of the story and what happens next, even if the outcomes may be the same.
Really like the style of the writing too, and it never got too wordy for me! Wonderful job!