Hello!
This was really fun to read-There was a weird thing where the perspective was in 2nd person, then goes to first person the rest of the time, but otherwise the writing was very clear and concise.
I'm a sucker for superhero like stuff, so playing as someone with powers that he's trying to hide was really fun and made me think "well, what would i do?" a lot. I just wish there were a bit more choices though. At the very least, however, the parts with choices in them felt very impactful.
I also love the setting and worldbuilding too-the beginning was slow, but that was probably to make sure the 2nd part after that would be fast and dynamic. I love it! Wonderful job!