Lovely game as always- so glad to see how it went. would love to see this in a format besides twine, like a visual novel style! right now the format kinda dulls my eyes.
the choices were used to make you understand the character's thoughts, which is interesting, as it gives the player an option to make Victor their own. At the same time, some of the choices didn't feel like choices-some of them felt like 2 sentences that were fragmented apart.
I also had no idea if it ended or not, because there wasn't a choice to continue (I got the ending where you smile at Henry at the end? shoot i forgot i should have screencapped it). but i really like how there was a narrative arc in this. It certainly felt complete and had rising actions and whatnot!!
Wonderful job :]