Ok. Straight off the bat, the idea of Gatsby being a frat boy is just so immensely funny to me and I have no idea why. Also "New Yorkers really are built different." There's some great lines in here. I like most of the choices, and think it has a pretty good sense of forward momentum. And simulating walking around the party was nice too. Luckily, I'm familiar with The Great Gatsby and I think you do a good job of adapting it while also modernizing the setting. I'm very interested to see where this love story goes and if the ending will be any similar to the original, because if it is, this might be more powerful than the book. Great work!