wow this made me really sad and i loooved it. and you know what, despite the bugs, it kinda worked in favor of the tone? like everything in the protags world is just breaking apart because of this divorce. it made me sad in like, a really good way that i didnt expect. it made me relaly want to fix things.
the world was really crazy to me -like, the job thing about having to be good in the eyes of god was intruging, because it feels like values of an older world, when i initially saw it as a more modern one. your writing is top notch, as always, and im really happy that this got made.
wonderful job! thanks for the sad feelings haha :'}