Hercules? How about HUNK-ules? Hah!
Gosh, that's a massive window. Let's see what this is about!
I adored the activity of each choice; the agency inherent was nice, even if it's mostly aesthetic. I'd love to hear more about the city; it seems it's some strange hybrid of modern and ancient, what with the whole dumplings, pink pajamas, boulders, God-wars, and whatnot.
Good stuff! I liked the vibe of the story, and the energy in each passage was very easy to feel. There were a few grammar things, but nothing major and nothing that hurt my understanding too much at all.
One thing to draw attention to, though, is the fact that the passages are immense. It takes quite a bit to realize that you're looking at a huge block of text, and it's hard to tell what's important! I found myself looking at the choices before the actual narrative quite a bit since the passages are so long.
Good stuff, though! I liked it.