This is great! I love how evocative the setting is. I was really intrigued by how similar the game's storyline is to the novel; as far as I can tell, a lot of the content is pretty one-for-one, yet you did a great job of reframing the narrative around your chosen genre and time period. I'll be really interested to see where the story goes from here and how it concludes. If it's anything like the novel, it'll be a huge twist, and hard to pull off -- but if you do pull it off, it'll be really incredible. Great job, I'd love to play this when it's finished!