The format was so interesting! I thought it was wonderful how I started out in a real, grounded world, and slowly entered the dream-state. The way you used the text effects and formatting helped to set the scene very well. My favorite part was the dream sequence, and the calendar app conversation. If you want to continue working on this: I think the beginning can have less details. Once I get to the calendar app conversation, I feel like the real game has begun. And the loops of clicking to refresh the news page, or to push through the crowd, feel like they're stuck, and I had to go back a few passages to get the story going again. Hopefully this is an easy fix! It seems like a coding error.