Howdy partner! This has expanded a lot since my last playthrough, and all for the better! I like the conversation at work a lot, as the way I responded to my boss felt to me like that was what shaped my protagonist the most. All the dialogue was really well done! Also "someone inserted himself into your wife" made me laugh more than anything else I've read today. The fact that it rhymes with the previous line makes it all the more wonderful. I think I might've gotten to a premature ending, but I saw your note at the bottom about the errors, so that's all fine and dandy. You've done a really good job of transporting the player to this foreign culture, and I really enjoyed the world, character dynamics, and dialogue! Great job!