hi wesley!
Really enjoyed this interpretation of Dorian Gray — as I've said before, you clearly have a very good handle on the character and how you want to portray him. The red text was a good, clear way to portray the painting's influence over the POV character as well — however, I'd recommend a different approach for the red nonsense text beneath the hyperlinked choices, mostly because it looks like a keysmash right now, which is slightly goofy to look at and undercuts the sort of light horror elements you're going for. Using some vague symbols or unusual characters there instead would probably be more successful in achieving that (even if it's a bit derivative). Part of me also wondered why brothels and opium dens were framed as overtly outlandish to Dorian when the suggestion arises — he describes his apathy as so overwhelming that I would expect those to be only mildly risque to him. The later murder also makes sense in the light of his descent into madness, but felt a bit rushed to me. As it appears to be the most horrific thing that occurs, I'd like to spend a bit more time exploring it!
-jess