hi lianna!
You've made great progress since the last prototype! I think your integrated choices are strong, and you have really strong narration of the action scenes. The choices seem like they will have a significant impact on the outcome of certain scenes, if not necessarily the entire story. So far, it seems like Robyn and Johan are close, but their relationship will create much more investment when the characters themselves are more fleshed out. Looking forward to seeing where it goes!
-jess